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(Contains: nudity)
model:iconaisii:
location:near timisoara,ro
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:iconengagingportraits:
Another great work from you both.

I have seen many naked women on track photos and this is the first one to really stand out and grab my attention.

The model is stunning wherever she is but what makes this so great for me is that even without her, it is a very interesting image.

I like the lines disappearing into the distance combined with the interesting poles at an angle. My eye moves around the image and finds interesting details to consider as well as beauty in form and composition.

The only aspect I am not sure contributes to the image is the darker band of cloud at the top. The contrast draws my eye to it but I find that distracting from the main picture. I think it very slightly unbalances the overall picture.

I love the way the models left arm and hand mimics the shape of her body and the way her back reflects light onto her right arm bringing that side of her body into relief.

I love the vertical square on aspect of the models upper body which is in sympathy with the straight rails and in opposition to the angle of the poles.

Finally I think the reflection of the light down the middle of the track is really effective.

As I said great work - keep it up.
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Guido219 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
This IS Magic !
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augenweide Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
your beautiful work is featured in my new journal...[link]
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:iconalfred-georg:
alfred-georg Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Photographer
thxs a
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:iconaugenweide:
augenweide Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconbrewplz:
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philippvince Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great photo, I love the model walkning with the perspective of the rails. great.
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eiskuh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
Please dont consider this an offense: I think the beautifully untouched lady could be left out. she does a really nice job of not caring and by that blending in nicely into this picture of vastly opposing contents with the straight down railway the rugged landscape and the completely strange land lines...but it would have already been a great picture form the motive itself :)
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Nomad55 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an amazing shot
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Jan-N-Diam Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Excellent ;-)
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:iconnomads:
nomads Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Excellent critique. Now I know why this photo also grabed my attention. Thank you alfred-george, Aisii and EngagingPortraits.
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IAmAlan Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
"Transcendant Presence :) !"
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